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	<description>Literary Agent</description>
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		<title>By: cna training</title>
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		<dc:creator>cna training</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 May 2010 05:28:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>nice post. thanks.</description>
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		<title>By: Start with a Story</title>
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		<dc:creator>Start with a Story</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Mar 2010 00:28:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] a story as if it were about the reader in the present. For example, in When You Query An Agent, my article published by The Writer Magazine, I used this technique: “You&#8217;ve written the [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] a story as if it were about the reader in the present. For example, in When You Query An Agent, my article published by The Writer Magazine, I used this technique: “You&#8217;ve written the [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Name removed</title>
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		<dc:creator>Name removed</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Feb 2010 20:04:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>(Contents of this message deleted because it is not appropriate to query here in a public forum for discussion of the article above.)</description>
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		<title>By: valerie Shakespeare</title>
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		<dc:creator>valerie Shakespeare</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Dec 2009 21:26:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dear Ms. Doyen

I am astounded that the only responses I coud see to your very informative &amp; helpful treatise was blatant violations of the very principles you provide. I ran an art gallery for 15 years &amp; I thought visual artists were the most difficult to deal with... But I think literary agents have me beat! I applaud your obvious patience &amp; generosity of spirit!

Thank you,

Valerie</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ms. Doyen</p>
<p>I am astounded that the only responses I coud see to your very informative &amp; helpful treatise was blatant violations of the very principles you provide. I ran an art gallery for 15 years &amp; I thought visual artists were the most difficult to deal with&#8230; But I think literary agents have me beat! I applaud your obvious patience &amp; generosity of spirit!</p>
<p>Thank you,</p>
<p>Valerie</p>
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		<title>By: Jerry Kroth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jerry Kroth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Nov 2009 16:38:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dear Ms. Doyen,

I’m a university psychology professor with eight previously published books. . . .

(The rest was deleted as it is inappropriate here to query our agency by publicly posting to an article. Please click on the Contact tab at the top right of every page on this site for info about querying us via email.)</description>
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<p>I’m a university psychology professor with eight previously published books. . . .</p>
<p>(The rest was deleted as it is inappropriate here to query our agency by publicly posting to an article. Please click on the Contact tab at the top right of every page on this site for info about querying us via email.)</p>
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		<title>By: Dylan Stephen Yanchynski</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dylan Stephen Yanchynski</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Oct 2009 01:23:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dear Ms. Doyen,

I am contacting you because your agency is interested in representing writing from new and unpublished authors. My memoir. . . 

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Dear writer,

It is inappropriate to post a query letter to a public forum for discussion. The Contact button located near the top of every page on this website will give you information about how to establish a business relationship with us.

Best wishes--Barb</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ms. Doyen,</p>
<p>I am contacting you because your agency is interested in representing writing from new and unpublished authors. My memoir. . . </p>
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<p>Dear writer,</p>
<p>It is inappropriate to post a query letter to a public forum for discussion. The Contact button located near the top of every page on this website will give you information about how to establish a business relationship with us.</p>
<p>Best wishes&#8211;Barb</p>
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		<title>By: How to Write a Cover Letter</title>
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		<dc:creator>How to Write a Cover Letter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Sep 2009 23:12:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...]          &#171; What is Self Publishing? When You Query an Agent [...]</description>
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